{"id":15663,"date":"2015-12-13T18:57:09","date_gmt":"2015-12-13T23:57:09","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/ianchadwick.com\/blog\/?p=15663"},"modified":"2016-06-06T08:58:09","modified_gmt":"2016-06-06T12:58:09","slug":"c","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/ianchadwick.com\/blog\/c\/","title":{"rendered":"The Secret to Good Writing"},"content":{"rendered":"<div class=\"pvc_clear\"><\/div>\n<p id=\"pvc_stats_15663\" class=\"pvc_stats all  \" data-element-id=\"15663\" style=\"\"><i class=\"pvc-stats-icon medium\" aria-hidden=\"true\"><svg xmlns=\"http:\/\/www.w3.org\/2000\/svg\" version=\"1.0\" viewBox=\"0 0 502 315\" preserveAspectRatio=\"xMidYMid meet\"><g transform=\"translate(0,332) scale(0.1,-0.1)\" fill=\"\" stroke=\"none\"><path d=\"M2394 3279 l-29 -30 -3 -207 c-2 -182 0 -211 15 -242 39 -76 157 -76 196 0 15 31 17 60 15 243 l-3 209 -33 29 c-26 23 -41 29 -80 29 -41 0 -53 -5 -78 -31z\"\/><path d=\"M3085 3251 c-45 -19 -58 -50 -96 -229 -47 -217 -49 -260 -13 -295 52 -53 146 -42 177 20 16 31 87 366 87 410 0 70 -86 122 -155 94z\"\/><path d=\"M1751 3234 c-13 -9 -29 -31 -37 -50 -12 -29 -10 -49 21 -204 19 -94 39 -189 45 -210 14 -50 54 -80 110 -80 34 0 48 6 76 34 21 21 34 44 34 59 0 14 -18 113 -40 219 -37 178 -43 195 -70 221 -36 32 -101 37 -139 11z\"\/><path d=\"M1163 3073 c-36 -7 -73 -59 -73 -102 0 -56 133 -378 171 -413 34 -32 83 -37 129 -13 70 36 67 87 -16 290 -86 209 -89 214 -129 231 -35 14 -42 15 -82 7z\"\/><path d=\"M3689 3066 c-15 -9 -33 -30 -42 -48 -48 -103 -147 -355 -147 -375 0 -98 131 -148 192 -74 13 15 57 108 97 206 80 196 84 226 37 273 -30 30 -99 39 -137 18z\"\/><path d=\"M583 2784 c-38 -19 -67 -74 -58 -113 9 -42 211 -354 242 -373 16 -10 45 -18 66 -18 51 0 107 52 107 100 0 39 -1 41 -124 234 -80 126 -108 162 -133 173 -41 17 -61 16 -100 -3z\"\/><path d=\"M4250 2784 c-14 -9 -74 -91 -133 -183 -95 -150 -107 -173 -107 -213 0 -55 33 -94 87 -104 67 -13 90 8 211 198 130 202 137 225 78 284 -27 27 -42 34 -72 34 -22 0 -50 -8 -64 -16z\"\/><path d=\"M2275 2693 c-553 -48 -1095 -270 -1585 -649 -135 -104 -459 -423 -483 -476 -23 -49 -22 -139 2 -186 73 -142 361 -457 571 -626 285 -228 642 -407 990 -497 242 -63 336 -73 660 -74 310 0 370 5 595 52 535 111 1045 392 1455 803 122 121 250 273 275 326 19 41 19 137 0 174 -41 79 -309 363 -465 492 -447 370 -946 591 -1479 653 -113 14 -422 18 -536 8z m395 -428 c171 -34 330 -124 456 -258 112 -119 167 -219 211 -378 27 -96 24 -300 -5 -401 -72 -255 -236 -447 -474 -557 -132 -62 -201 -76 -368 -76 -167 0 -236 14 -368 76 -213 98 -373 271 -451 485 -162 444 86 934 547 1084 153 49 292 57 452 25z m909 -232 c222 -123 408 -262 593 -441 76 -74 138 -139 138 -144 0 -16 -233 -242 -330 -319 -155 -123 -309 -223 -461 -299 l-81 -41 32 46 c18 26 49 83 70 128 143 306 141 649 -6 957 -25 52 -61 116 -79 142 l-34 47 45 -20 c26 -10 76 -36 113 -56z m-2057 25 c-40 -58 -105 -190 -130 -263 -110 -324 -59 -707 132 -981 25 -35 42 -64 37 -64 -19 0 -241 119 -326 174 -188 122 -406 314 -532 468 l-58 71 108 103 c185 178 428 349 672 473 66 33 121 60 123 61 2 0 -10 -19 -26 -42z\"\/><path d=\"M2375 1950 c-198 -44 -350 -190 -395 -379 -18 -76 -8 -221 19 -290 114 -284 457 -406 731 -260 98 52 188 154 231 260 27 69 37 214 19 290 -38 163 -166 304 -326 360 -67 23 -215 33 -279 19z\"\/><\/g><\/svg><\/i> <img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" width=\"16\" height=\"16\" alt=\"Loading\" src=\"https:\/\/ianchadwick.com\/blog\/wp-content\/plugins\/page-views-count\/ajax-loader-2x.gif\" border=0 \/><\/p>\n<div class=\"pvc_clear\"><\/div>\n<p><img decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignright\" src=\"http:\/\/2.bp.blogspot.com\/-_SS1HrHhHqY\/TW09QeXlOBI\/AAAAAAAAAJs\/kh2A7gFG5E0\/s1600\/writer-736783.jpg\" alt=\"The urge to write\" width=\"250\" \/><strong>Spoiler alert: the secret to writing well is&#8230;. (insert drum roll)..<\/strong>. <em>writing<\/em>. Writing a lot. Every day. Every possible minute you can spare. Writing and writing more and then writing even more. But doing so within a pre-specified limit. Oops&#8230;<\/p>\n<p>Now we all know that, aside from some local bloggers and EB columnists, most of us get better the more we practice a thing. Writing &#8211; aside from the aforementioned inept exceptions &#8211; included.<\/p>\n<p>It means not vegging in front of the TV all night, or trolling the Net for images of the Kardashian&#8217;s oversized ass, or scrolling through Facebook streams. It means writing. Sitting down and writing instead of doing a lot of less meaningful but pleasantly mind-numbing things.<\/p>\n<p>That, in brief, is the message in a recent article in <a href=\"http:\/\/www.theguardian.com\/lifeandstyle\/2015\/dec\/11\/column-change-life-very-expensive-secret-good-writing-oliver-burkeman?CMP=fb_gu\" target=\"_blank\">The Guardian<\/a>. Author\u00a0Oliver Burkeman\u00a0distills this from his reading of <a href=\"http:\/\/www.amazon.ca\/gp\/product\/0275949079\/\" target=\"_blank\">How Writers Journey To Comfort And Fluency<\/a>, an apparently\u00a0highly\u00a0over-priced book by Robert Boice (the reviewer\u00a0didn&#8217;t check to see if Boice had <a href=\"http:\/\/www.amazon.ca\/Professors-Writers-Self-Help-Productive-Writing\/dp\/091350713X\" target=\"_blank\">re-packaged his book<\/a> under a less-expensive format). As Burkeman\u00a0puts it,<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>The kernel of Boice\u2019s advice, based on writing workshops conducted with struggling academics, isn\u2019t merely old. It\u2019s the oldest in the world: write, every weekday, in brief scheduled sessions, as short as 10 minutes at first, then getting longer. Reading that, I nearly flung my \u00a368 book across the room in impatience. But that wouldn\u2019t surprise Boice. Because impatience, for him, is a huge part of why writing causes so much grief.<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>As the owner of a healthy library of books on writing and grammar, and as someone who writes every day, as if driven by compulsion, I can attest to his frustration. Far too many of these self-described experts blather on about what is basically a simple process, and make it both more complex and mystical than it really is: write, write some more, then write even more.<\/p>\n<p>So far, Boice has that right. But he strays from the message.<\/p>\n<p><!--more--><\/p>\n<p>I take exception at Boice&#8217;s advice that writing needs must be strictly time-limited and scheduled as if it were a leisure activity. As Burkeman\u00a0writes:<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>This gets clearer when it comes to one of Boice\u2019s favourite tips: when your daily writing time is up, stop dead, even if you\u2019ve got momentum and could write more. Maybe you could. But you\u2019d be reinforcing the notion of writing as a mysterious force, to be harnessed whenever it shows up, rather than a humdrum activity you choose, undramatically, to do. \u201cThe urge to continue,\u201d Boice writes, \u201cincludes a big component of impatience about not being finished, about not being productive enough, about never again finding such an ideal time for writing.\u201d Stop when the timer goes off, and you\u2019ll build self-discipline. Keep going longer, and you\u2019re just indulging your insecurity.<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>To which I must respond: <em>claptrap<\/em>. If the muse moves you, then write more. Write until the ink in you dries up. Creativity is not easily bound by simplistic time frames or restrictive instructions.<\/p>\n<p>There are hundreds of books in print about how to write (and I own far too many of them&#8230;). Many\u00a0of them deal with style, plot and\u00a0structure.\u00a0Others deal with the techniques of dialogue, scene and pacing. Some have exercises and progressions meant to take you from a paper patzer to a published author. But\u00a0most of them are like helium: a gas that makes a squeaky noises in your voice, and carries away balloons, but is gone too soon to make a lasting impact.<\/p>\n<p>Writing is not simply a skill, not just an art. It&#8217;s a practice; as much perspiration as inspiration. Like music, painting, sculpture or any sport. Having talent, aptitude and innate skill only takes you so far. The rest of the way requires a lot of work.<\/p>\n<p>You have to learn the rules first: the language, usage, grammar, punctuation and style. Then you have to do it a lot to get better at it, to make your writing stand out; make sense; get read.<\/p>\n<p>You also have to explore and examine what others have done to hone your own style. You need to read a lot, and read what other stylists and grammarians comment on, to find your own style and approach.<\/p>\n<p>And you need to write. Write, write, write. As <a href=\"http:\/\/www.advicetowriters.com\/\" target=\"_blank\">Tim O&#8217;Brien said<\/a>,<\/p>\n<blockquote><p>No book ever gets written by thinking about it or going bowling or playing golf. You have to put your butt down and spend many, many hours in front of a computer or a piece of paper, and don\u2019t get up, even if you\u2019re blocked or don\u2019t know what\u2019s going to happen next or you don\u2019t know what the next sentence should be. You\u2019re like a donkey, you just keep plodding. And that quality of perseverance and stubbornness is really important.<\/p><\/blockquote>\n<p>All the inspirational quotes in the world\u00a0don&#8217;t equal\u00a0the simple act of writing. Plod and plod more, but don&#8217;;t stop. You don&#8217;t have to publish everything you write, so keep plodding until you&#8217;re comfortable enough with your efforts to share them. The act of writing should be its own reward.<\/p>\n<p>To be sure, there&#8217;s a vast divide between writing fiction and non-fiction. The latter, to be good, requires an understanding and appreciation of fact and data that fiction does not demand. That&#8217;s one of the reasons local newspaper columnists are considered lame: they write without such understanding or knowledge. They are simply dilettantes who insert personal ideologies and cant in\u00a0place\u00a0of fact, which discredits both them and their newspapers.<\/p>\n<p>Here&#8217;s another tip, that Boice may not acknowledge (I have only read the reviews, not his book): let others read your work, especially those whose appreciation of language and style you respect. Find out how they respond, what they read in it, whether it makes sense to them. Read it aloud, too. Reading aloud can reveal a remarkable amount about your pacing, style and structure.<\/p>\n<p>In the end, there&#8217;s no real substitute for hard work. Writing, like everything else, requires more than just the hardware to make it happen. You have to work at it.<\/p>\n<p>But it does help to have a passion for writing and to make yours better. Better, at least, than the dreck that appears in the local paper.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<div class=\"pvc_clear\"><\/div>\n<p id=\"pvc_stats_15663\" class=\"pvc_stats all  \" data-element-id=\"15663\" style=\"\"><i class=\"pvc-stats-icon medium\" aria-hidden=\"true\"><svg xmlns=\"http:\/\/www.w3.org\/2000\/svg\" version=\"1.0\" viewBox=\"0 0 502 315\" preserveAspectRatio=\"xMidYMid meet\"><g transform=\"translate(0,332) scale(0.1,-0.1)\" fill=\"\" stroke=\"none\"><path d=\"M2394 3279 l-29 -30 -3 -207 c-2 -182 0 -211 15 -242 39 -76 157 -76 196 0 15 31 17 60 15 243 l-3 209 -33 29 c-26 23 -41 29 -80 29 -41 0 -53 -5 -78 -31z\"\/><path d=\"M3085 3251 c-45 -19 -58 -50 -96 -229 -47 -217 -49 -260 -13 -295 52 -53 146 -42 177 20 16 31 87 366 87 410 0 70 -86 122 -155 94z\"\/><path d=\"M1751 3234 c-13 -9 -29 -31 -37 -50 -12 -29 -10 -49 21 -204 19 -94 39 -189 45 -210 14 -50 54 -80 110 -80 34 0 48 6 76 34 21 21 34 44 34 59 0 14 -18 113 -40 219 -37 178 -43 195 -70 221 -36 32 -101 37 -139 11z\"\/><path d=\"M1163 3073 c-36 -7 -73 -59 -73 -102 0 -56 133 -378 171 -413 34 -32 83 -37 129 -13 70 36 67 87 -16 290 -86 209 -89 214 -129 231 -35 14 -42 15 -82 7z\"\/><path d=\"M3689 3066 c-15 -9 -33 -30 -42 -48 -48 -103 -147 -355 -147 -375 0 -98 131 -148 192 -74 13 15 57 108 97 206 80 196 84 226 37 273 -30 30 -99 39 -137 18z\"\/><path d=\"M583 2784 c-38 -19 -67 -74 -58 -113 9 -42 211 -354 242 -373 16 -10 45 -18 66 -18 51 0 107 52 107 100 0 39 -1 41 -124 234 -80 126 -108 162 -133 173 -41 17 -61 16 -100 -3z\"\/><path d=\"M4250 2784 c-14 -9 -74 -91 -133 -183 -95 -150 -107 -173 -107 -213 0 -55 33 -94 87 -104 67 -13 90 8 211 198 130 202 137 225 78 284 -27 27 -42 34 -72 34 -22 0 -50 -8 -64 -16z\"\/><path d=\"M2275 2693 c-553 -48 -1095 -270 -1585 -649 -135 -104 -459 -423 -483 -476 -23 -49 -22 -139 2 -186 73 -142 361 -457 571 -626 285 -228 642 -407 990 -497 242 -63 336 -73 660 -74 310 0 370 5 595 52 535 111 1045 392 1455 803 122 121 250 273 275 326 19 41 19 137 0 174 -41 79 -309 363 -465 492 -447 370 -946 591 -1479 653 -113 14 -422 18 -536 8z m395 -428 c171 -34 330 -124 456 -258 112 -119 167 -219 211 -378 27 -96 24 -300 -5 -401 -72 -255 -236 -447 -474 -557 -132 -62 -201 -76 -368 -76 -167 0 -236 14 -368 76 -213 98 -373 271 -451 485 -162 444 86 934 547 1084 153 49 292 57 452 25z m909 -232 c222 -123 408 -262 593 -441 76 -74 138 -139 138 -144 0 -16 -233 -242 -330 -319 -155 -123 -309 -223 -461 -299 l-81 -41 32 46 c18 26 49 83 70 128 143 306 141 649 -6 957 -25 52 -61 116 -79 142 l-34 47 45 -20 c26 -10 76 -36 113 -56z m-2057 25 c-40 -58 -105 -190 -130 -263 -110 -324 -59 -707 132 -981 25 -35 42 -64 37 -64 -19 0 -241 119 -326 174 -188 122 -406 314 -532 468 l-58 71 108 103 c185 178 428 349 672 473 66 33 121 60 123 61 2 0 -10 -19 -26 -42z\"\/><path d=\"M2375 1950 c-198 -44 -350 -190 -395 -379 -18 -76 -8 -221 19 -290 114 -284 457 -406 731 -260 98 52 188 154 231 260 27 69 37 214 19 290 -38 163 -166 304 -326 360 -67 23 -215 33 -279 19z\"\/><\/g><\/svg><\/i> <img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" width=\"16\" height=\"16\" alt=\"Loading\" src=\"https:\/\/ianchadwick.com\/blog\/wp-content\/plugins\/page-views-count\/ajax-loader-2x.gif\" border=0 \/><\/p>\n<div class=\"pvc_clear\"><\/div>\n<p>Spoiler alert: the secret to writing well is&#8230;. (insert drum roll)&#8230; writing. Writing a lot. Every day. Every possible minute you can spare. Writing and writing more and then writing even more. But doing so within a pre-specified limit. Oops&#8230; Now we all know that, aside from some local bloggers and EB columnists, most of us get better the more we practice a thing. Writing &#8211; aside from the aforementioned inept exceptions &#8211; included. It means not vegging in front of the TV all night, or trolling the Net for images of the Kardashian&#8217;s oversized ass, or scrolling through Facebook \u2026&#8230;&#8230; click below for more \u2193<\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"_jetpack_newsletter_access":"","_jetpack_dont_email_post_to_subs":false,"_jetpack_newsletter_tier_id":0,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paywalled_content":false,"_jetpack_hide_featured_image":false,"_jetpack_featured_image_duplicate_dismissed":0,"_jetpack_feature_clip_id":0,"_jetpack_memberships_contains_paid_content":false,"footnotes":"","jetpack_publicize_message":"","jetpack_publicize_feature_enabled":true,"jetpack_social_post_already_shared":true,"jetpack_social_options":{"image_generator_settings":{"template":"highway","default_image_id":0,"font":"","enabled":false},"version":2},"jetpack_post_was_ever_published":false},"categories":[444,73,263,445,432],"tags":[75,147,134],"class_list":["post-15663","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-grammar-language-grammar","category-language-grammar","category-writing-2","category-style-usage","category-writing-fiction","tag-language","tag-reading","tag-writing"],"a3_pvc":{"activated":true,"total_views":5826,"today_views":0},"jetpack_publicize_connections":[],"jetpack_sharing_enabled":true,"jetpack_likes_enabled":true,"jetpack-related-posts":[],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"","_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/ianchadwick.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/15663","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/ianchadwick.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/ianchadwick.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/ianchadwick.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/ianchadwick.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=15663"}],"version-history":[{"count":5,"href":"https:\/\/ianchadwick.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/15663\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":15668,"href":"https:\/\/ianchadwick.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/15663\/revisions\/15668"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/ianchadwick.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=15663"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/ianchadwick.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=15663"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/ianchadwick.com\/blog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=15663"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}